Alright.
One suggestion that I have along with including the names of all his children and their mothers is that the part where someone has said that he was alone for 16 years, I think that should be taken out.
Another thing that should be taken out, is where someone quoted him on his excuses for his infidelity, along with his generous offer. Hopefully he doesn't feel that way anymore.
Could you work with Wikipedia? I never have, and not sure how to go about it. Thanks much.