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Old 02-15-2009, 05:28 AM   #3
geodeticman.5
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Default Re: Whay Lightfoot tune fits ?

In comparison to my first two attempts above, is the following closer to what you have in mind ? :

With my ending thoughts above more in mind - the overall intent of the song - with the ...intent not of the whole movie - but of the dialogue extract, broadly speaking - I think.. I am honing in on your target. ?? How 'bout this:

Given movie dialogue extract:

#11.) "What we've got here is failure to communicate."

and in keeping with that dialogue extract:
My submitted song:
IYCRMM

Lyrics close to the intent example:
'And if you read between the lines you'll know that I'm just trying to understand'

Hmm - IYCRMM seemed overall strongly in the nature of the given dialogie, but any one line unto itself does not work. But the whole song is based IMO on a failure to communicate in retrospect in IYCRMM.

Waddya think on that angle ?
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