Critique of song

[nvtmusic]

Hi Folks ,
I hope - this is the right place to post this . I havent posted much -(shy about it)but i always keep up to date threw this great resource . We have had the privilege (my family
and I ) of seeing Mr Lightfoot's Concerts on numurous occassions . - The best over the years at Massey hall . Mr Lightfoots music , like lots of people has had a big influence on me too. I have a song posted on myspace That I wrote and performed . It's a true story
about a friend of mine that passed away a few years ago . - I think you will might hear
the obvious influence . I apologize again if this is not the place to post this ,
Best To All ,
mike
-here is the link
http://www.myspace.com/michaeliula

[DawnsMinstrel]

Hi Mike,

I'd say you picked the right spot alright. Nice song, and very well produced. Maybe when I'm ready to make a CD I'll get in touch, who knows.

I don't know why you're shy about posting your music. Let's hear some more!

Tim

[nvtmusic]

Hi Tim ,
Thanks for checking it out ,
(i have about 50 songs and am working on getting them
down ) .I went to your site - That is really great Stuff !!
Best regards
mike

[Yuri]

Very nice arrangement. Enjoyed it!. Yeah, I can hear the influence. ......and you like Jim Croce too!

[DawnsMinstrel]

Hi Tim ,
Thanks for checking it out ,
(i have about 50 songs and am working on getting them
down ) .I went to your site - That is really great Stuff !!
Best regards
mike

Thanks Mike. I'm trying to put together some more originals. I've got a new one written and almost ready to record (to youtube.) The folks here at corfid have really been good about encouraging my efforts. So you've definitely come to the right place.

I hope you'll post more songs for us. I sure wish I had 50 songs.

regards,

Tim

[nvtmusic]

Hi Yuri ,
Thanks for checking it out ,
I really appreciate the input
Thanks Again
mike